Great Writing – Sizzling Starts!

Both Evelyn and Demi wrote some very Sizzling beginnings for stories yesterday.  Click on the arrow to listen. Great job girls! :-)>
Evelyn wrote about the prompt:

In an instant, everything started to slide across the room.

Evelyn called it: The World is Tipping Over

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Demi wrote about the prompt:

The School Excursion and annoying Max was the one who found the gold nugget!

Demi called it: “The School Excursion”.

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