WINTER OLYMPICS TENSION SCENES

Well done to these writers, Indi, Eli and Olive. You wrote very descriptive tension scenes and I love the way you used your 5 + 1 senses words to bring your writing to life.  Great job! 😎

The Skeleton Race by Eli

The Ski Race by Indi

The Ski Race by Olive

We’d love your comments on their imagination and how well they created tension (excitement) in their writing!

Mrs Veary

2 thoughts on “WINTER OLYMPICS TENSION SCENES

  1. Anonymous says:

    Very creative ideas Olive ‘pine scented deodorant’ and as always I love the expression in the reading.

  2. Gale Stroehle says:

    Love the descriptive words Olive used to describe her sense of smell, sight and taste A great effort in how the children created tension describing their hopes in winning.

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