Well done to these writers, Indi, Eli and Olive. You wrote very descriptive tension scenes and I love the way you used your 5 + 1 senses words to bring your writing to life. Great job! 😎
The Skeleton Race by Eli
The Ski Race by Indi
The Ski Race by Olive
We’d love your comments on their imagination and how well they created tension (excitement) in their writing!
Mrs Veary
Very creative ideas Olive ‘pine scented deodorant’ and as always I love the expression in the reading.
Love the descriptive words Olive used to describe her sense of smell, sight and taste A great effort in how the children created tension describing their hopes in winning.