Both Evelyn and Demi wrote some very Sizzling beginnings for stories yesterday. Click on the arrow to listen. Great job girls! :-)>
Evelyn wrote about the prompt:
In an instant, everything started to slide across the room.
Evelyn called it: The World is Tipping Over
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Demi wrote about the prompt:
The School Excursion and annoying Max was the one who found the gold nugget!
Demi called it: “The School Excursion”.
Room 6 says: You read with good expression, Demi and it was a funny story!
Demi seems super strong
This is one of the most Beautiful stories I have heard you did a great job
Also this is a very funny story
This is one of the best stories I have ever heard
Great job Demi and Evelyn.
WOW Evelyn and Demi these are some great stories please keep up the great work I would love to hear some more stories from you
WOW your stories are amazing and Demi you did some great voices please rite some more great stories
Super job you are both writing heroes.